Thesis Revisions

1. Road rage has caused the accident rates to skyrocket more than any other road distractions such as poor weather, and increased cell phone usage.

2. The increase in violence in Disney films has led to an increase in crime, death, and violence amongst America’s youth.

3. Although they all seem similar, there are many different types of ants that are separated by a variety of characteristics

4. Through animals that have been mistreated or abused we can see human kindness that is not always shown in all animals.

5. The effects of global warming have caused a severe increase in droughts across the world.

6. In Stephen King’s “The Shining” , King shows us how one man can be persuaded by ghosts to turn on his family.

7. Icebergs, poor leadership, and impatient investors lead to the sinking of the Titanic in the Atlantic Ocean.

8. Dug addiction in America has increased the rate of violence, murders and jail time for Americans in inner cities.

9.Saving Private Ryan is the best movie ever because of it’s directing, acting, and cinematography.

10. Because of their breeding, food costs, and required shelters, rabbits make very poor pets.

11. A United States president should have charisma, compassion, and control.

12. Fighting, sabotage, and poor role models has tarnished the drop-dead gorgeous realm of beauty pageants.

13. The change in clothing to include more profanity, and cover less skin has led to school uniforms becoming necessary.

14. Williams Shakespeare proves himself to be the best writer ever through his works Macbeth, Hamlet, and The Tempest

15. Aromatherapy helps to soothe the mind, body, and spirit.